Story: "The Date"

This is one of the stories that I was working on before creating the “Love Story” about the rat catcher and the rat. The detail in the story below is not to the same level as the “Love Story”, but that is only I did not explore the story and its possibilities as I was not going to create an animation on it. I tried to focus my time on more productive things.

Trevor is walking up to Ashley’s house. The first date is always nervy. This time he spared no expense, all of the money he had earned that month was going on the date, but that was not much, a waiters job does not really pay, especially for a 16 year old.
Walking along the garden path towards the door, all he could think about is how beautiful she was.

(Thought bubble above character with girls image)

He walked up the steps and knocked on the door. Took a deep breath and clutching the flowers he had brought her, tightly in his hand. The door opens.

(Front view of Trevor, glow on face. Then cuts to a fat man standing in the door).

The boy smiles at the miserable fat man and his daughter squeezes in-between then both. The boy grins and gives the girl the flowers. The girl looks unimpressed and walks down the path.

(The story will then show them buying tickets at the movies, and then sit down watching a movie, probably Spiderman. The scene where Spiderman and the girl kiss comes on and Trevor moves his arm around the girl. The movie then shows Spiderman’s head devour the girls. Trevor looks horrified and moves his arm slowly away.)